Comments for Derick W J Tan

Comment on The One With How To Eat A Chicken Wing by drea

drea — Tue, 03 Nov 2009 13:37:50 +0000

i eat my chicken wings like that too!

Comment on The One With The Flash Mob by michelle x)

michelle x) — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 10:08:49 +0000

:D
There’s one vid where everyone freezes where they are for 5 minutes XD

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjKtn9K9fNo

but these kinda things are AWESOME.

Comment on Fragmented by Derick W J Tan

Derick W J Tan — Tue, 20 Oct 2009 06:01:26 +0000

LOL! Flying pie? Hmmm, we’ll see how it goes, haha!

And yeah, I’ll most likely upload it somewhere once I’m done =)

Comment on Fragmented by michelle x)

michelle x) — Tue, 20 Oct 2009 02:30:30 +0000

unfair.

you get to shoot some video, with what sounds like boundless freedom.

ASDFGHJKL. SPELLS. UNFAIR.

BLAH.

All the best yeah. Just remember, write not for the readers (okay partially for the readers), but ALWAYS for yourself. Move on only after you’re satisfied.

Go Derick! -waves pie and splats it into your face-

COUGHcanyouincludeaflyingpieinyourvidCOUGH. No. Can you share your vid with us when you’re done? :D

Comment on The One With The Yearly Projects by michelle x)

michelle x) — Sun, 11 Oct 2009 10:31:00 +0000

Glad to hear that :D!
First ever distinction must be exceptionally sweet, HAHA!
Once again, well done and congratulations XD.

Projects with friends are so fun right :D

Comment on The One With The Yearly Projects by Derick W J Tan

Derick W J Tan — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 12:27:33 +0000

Haha, it’s my first ever Distinction and I had so much fun working on it with my friends =D

Comment on The One With The Yearly Projects by michelle x)

michelle x) — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 07:57:58 +0000

You seem pleased with your results XD.

Congrats (:

Comment on The One With Miss Singapore World by michelle x)

michelle x) — Sun, 04 Oct 2009 13:29:56 +0000

HAHA, punchline FTW! :D

Comment on Feedback and Comments by Mansoo Kim

Mansoo Kim — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 22:54:48 +0000

wow. again. i really enjoyed reading part 2 of the project might story.
but yet again, so many questions unanswered ><

the ending really confused me. is tiffany really dead or not? you kept referring to it as "her condition" and was really vague about it.

and i didnt like how geralt was able to whip ixion's butt… i was expecting Ixion to be stronger cause hes the 2nd and Geralt is the 3rd. but then again, the guy who started the Projects did say that Geralt's "birth" was moved up when Ixion's was delayed. this confused me, because in Specimen One Mythias, it was said that Ixion was a human child who was genetically enhanced, while the other Specimen were "created."

anyway i cant wait for the 3rd part =D

now for comments about your writing.
i noticed that your grammar noticeably became better in Specimen Two Ixion than Specimen One Mythias so good job. i also noticed that some of the dialogue in the story sounds awkward, but overall, i enjoyed reading the conversations.

i cant really say much, cause im not a writer myself and dont have much to comment on

Comment on Feedbacks and Comments by Mansoo Kim

Mansoo Kim — Sat, 26 Sep 2009 23:25:23 +0000

wow. i really enjoyed reading specimen one mythias.
especially the ending. i was hoping mythias wouldnt die, but you killed him off at the end! now what would happen to poor Saki when her lover’s head explodes while they’re embracing each other?!

this story really leaves a lot of question unaswered, like what exactly can mythias ixion and the others do? and i think in the story you mentioned ixion is different than the other 3. could u explain that more? why is mythias’s body so unstable while the other specimen arent? why was ixion so weak xD whats the purpose of the “canes” the specimen were holding?

as far as i understand, the First had a lot of power but his body was unstable? while Ixion’s body was stable, he only has 1 power which is telekinesis? is that right?

hopefully a lot of the questions can be answered in the future parts =D