The Next Update
Good news, the next update will be a double-special =)
In the mean time…
Chapter 16 – TFA
(Click on the link to read Chapter 16)
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- Derick
No Flow Yo~
One thing that I liked about Specimen Two and hated in Specimen One was the flow.
There has to be a flow to the words, sentences and paragraphs in order for the reading experience to be smooth and pleasant. Specimen One was severely lacking in this but I believe I improved a little in Specimen Two. The problem now is that I seem to be losing the flow again while working on Specimen Three.
Oh did I not mention this? Draft one of Specimen Three has already begun.
I already have the outline but of course it’ll be improved on as I continue to brainstorm further, but I decided to start writing first because the outline seems steady enough for a first draft to be written. This way it’ll give me a more solid picture of the entire story and I can focus more when brainstorming. But now it feels awkward when I’m writing because the words aren’t coming to me which makes it very, very difficult to write. There is no flow. Everything feels either forced or copied/cliched which simply continues to make me more and more reluctant to write.
So I won’t.
Instead, I’m going to start reading again and try to finish Chronicles of Narnia and maybe even try to finish Twilight O.o Alright, sorry, I lied, I’m not even going to try and read Twilight. I’ll be reading Chronicles of Narnia books and Starcraft novels – since the game is releasing soon - during this period and I’m quite confident it’ll get me my flow back.
As for updates on Specimen Two, I’ll be releasing another chapter tomorrow =)
One of these days I’ll post some comments that my readers at Soshified.com has posted.
- Derick
Update!
Chapter 15 – Safety Measure
(Click on the link to read Chapter 15)
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I just realized how this seemingly stupid website – oh come on, do I want to update you on what I’m doing every bloody minute? – can actually make receiving chapter updates much easier.
https://twitter.com/derick_wj_tan
I absolutely refuse to say “Go twit me, guys!” because for some reason it sounds very vulgar and simply wrong to me.
“Twit me~”
>.>
Instead, I will ask you guys to follow me on twitter get updates on my blog. Every time I post up a new chapter or write a new post, I’ll update my twitter which will in turn inform you.
I’ll try this out for about a month and see how many people actually follows me. I doubt there’ll be many since twitter is still fairly new – I believe? – in Singapore, so if by the end of the month there are like less than 10 people following me, it’s to hell with twitter again =)
Oh yes, I’ve decided to change this blogskin after I tried to read Specimen One: Mythias on the old skin. Turns out it was bloody pain the neck. The words were freaking tiny and the background was simply too dark.
This skin is a lot brighter and there’s a lot more width so the paragraphs won’t get cramped up. And what I love most about this skin is that the background isn’t pure white. It’s kind of a little bit tinted - like a book - so it won’t be such a strain on your eyes.
- Derick
The One With A Lack Of Feedbacks
Over the the past few days I’ve noted that several people have read through the entire story of Specimen One: Mythias, but did not comment.
That makes thing a little bit difficult for me.
You see on the one hand, I have to be nice and respect that it’s up to the reader if he or she wants to leave a comment. On the other hand, it is really, really, really frustrating to know that someone have read through a story you spent months working on – for free – and could not at the very least leave a comment as simple as “Good story, I enjoyed it =)” or “Story sucks. Please die.”
Acknowledgement.
Good or bad.
That’s all I need to know so please, if you’ve read my story, do me this one simple favour and just tell me whether or not you enjoyed it.
Thank you.
- Derick
Saranghae~
Chapter 14 – Saranghae
(Click on the link to read Chapter 14)
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Saranghae, of course, means ‘I love you’ in Korean but you probably know that already.
Anyway, along with this update I’m going to put a face to all the names of the SNSD girls (7 out of 9 members here) that you’ve read in Specimen Two: Ixion. If you know them already, I doubt you’ll complain looking at these pictures again. If you don’t know them, well, here you go:
Tiffany

Seo Hyun

Tae Yeon

Yoona

(She has long hair in the story)
Jessica

Yuri

Soo Young

(She has long hair in the story, no guns, not TFA)
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And in case I haven’t explain already, here’s a brief lowdown of why I’m a fan.
They are freaking beautiful – I’m lying if I say that’s not a reason. They have amazing voices that compliments one another. They can be freaking adorable too and at the same time they can be the dorkiest people you’ve ever met. But the two most important things are that:
They work hard.
- Spent a long time training without knowing if they’ll ever get to debut
They are passionate.
- By a long time I mean more than 5 bloody years
They made their dreams to be a singer a reality.
As a Singaporean who is trying to become a publish novelist of the Science-Fiction and Fantasy genre, my dream is really quite… out of reach, when you consider all factors. So as opposed to most other fans who simply enjoy their music… or looking at them -_- I’m a fan because they’re constantly there reminding me that dreams can become reality.
And it really helps a-bloody-lot in keeping me going chapter after chapter, draft after draft and story after story.
Hopefully one day I can add on and say book after book.
=)
- Derick
The One With WINGSSSS!!!!
So Nyuh Shi Dae – Tell Me Your Wish
http://soshified.com/forums/
While most of the other fans are going crazy over their legs I, on the other hand, am going crazy over the cake.

And more particularly, the wings.
THE WINGS!!!!!
HAHAAHA!!!!
ANGEL I TELL YOU! ANGEL!
Note: It is rare that I lose my composure and transform into what is commonly known as a ‘fanboy’. Rare, but nonetheless it has and it will continue to happen from time to time, so do bear with it and just enjoy the main content which for this case is the music video =)
Maknae <3
Freaking adorable, haha~
- Derick
Realizations
So Soo Young has lost all her memories that she had after she was adopted. How are they going to help her? How is she going to react now that she’s like, what, 8 years old mentally?
Go find out =)
Chapter 13 – Realizations
(Click on the link to read Chapter 13)
3 Days
Here’s a fast update since the last chapter was so short and because this latest chapter is so long, you’re gonna have to wait 3 days for the next update =P
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Chapter 12 – A Burger For A Friend
(Click on the link to read Chapter 12)
- Derick
Umma
Time to learn some more Korean!
Umma – Mother
Appa – Father
Unnie – used by girls to address their older sister
Noona – used by boys to address their older sister
Oppa – used by girls to address their older brother
Hyung - used by boys to address their older brother
Dongsaeng – used by both gender to address their younger sibling
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Chapter 11 – Umma
(Click on the link to read Chapter 11)
- Derick